Låttext nr.1!
"The rage is building up
It takes control of me
I must fight it or cease to be
It's been a part of me
For many a year
Spreading like poison through my veins
Crushing my spirit, blinding my vision
My blood is boiling with this inner rage
In the blink of an eye, it explodes
It comes crashing to the surface
Making the urge to scream even stronger
The Demon within is pullin' the strings
Makin' me hate and say all these fucking things
He's pulling me further and further down the line
Am I going to miss the exit sign?
Frustration and anxiety lies along this path
And I've followed it for quite some time
But I've grown so god damn tired of this
It's time for me to change
The Demon within is pullin' the strings
Makin' me hate and say all these fucking things
He's pulling me further and further down the line
Am I going to miss the exit sign?"
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It takes control of me
I must fight it or cease to be
It's been a part of me
For many a year
Spreading like poison through my veins
Crushing my spirit, blinding my vision
My blood is boiling with this inner rage
In the blink of an eye, it explodes
It comes crashing to the surface
Making the urge to scream even stronger
The Demon within is pullin' the strings
Makin' me hate and say all these fucking things
He's pulling me further and further down the line
Am I going to miss the exit sign?
Frustration and anxiety lies along this path
And I've followed it for quite some time
But I've grown so god damn tired of this
It's time for me to change
The Demon within is pullin' the strings
Makin' me hate and say all these fucking things
He's pulling me further and further down the line
Am I going to miss the exit sign?"
Tänkte bara slänga upp en text jag har skrivit här, ge gärna feedback på den. Vad som är bra/dåligt etc.
Kommentarer
Postat av: ROCKABETTY
Som den lilla positiva smurf jag är så ville jag säga att texten var jävligt bra! Märks att det är lite personlig, om nu så är fallet XD vad vet jag. Anyways, fortsätt så! :D
Postat av: Nadim
Awesome :'D Släng till en vers till där du drar fram ett stort jävla greatsword och dödar demonen innuti dig genom att begå hara-kiri :'D
Postat av: Jessica
sv; Tokio Hotel & Enter Shikari :)
Postat av: Sandra
Jag gillert!
Postat av: David Boman
Härligt att du skriver bra texter också. Vårt band lär bli awesome!
Postat av: Anton
Fett bra!
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